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六级写作笔记

Outline

三段论,开头 + 中间 + 结尾

开头

开头第一句模板(不可否认,毋庸置疑的是)

  • There is little doubt that …
  • It cannot be denied that …
  • It is generally accepted that …
  • It goes without saying that …

####八个常用典型句子

… 很重要,… 很好
  • … play an important role on …
  • be of importance (Be of + n == Be + adj)
  • Important 可以被替换为 Essential, Key
重视…
  • Pay a (special) attention to
    • 也可使用被动语态(much attention has been paid to ..)
  • Lay emphasis on
…产生了争议
  • Opinions vary when it comes to …(从句)
  • There is much controversy over …(从句)
A 对 B 产生了影响
  • A exert a positive/nagative/great impact on B
在某时某地发生了…,见证了…,随着…
  • A witness B
    Eg: The past few years has witnessed an exponential increase in the number of parents who wish to send their children to arts class. (过去几年里,越来越多的家长把孩子送到艺术学校) (过去几年见证了越来越多的家长把害死送到艺术学校)
    PS:快速的上升速度(exponential / sharp / striking) increase.
…使得…
  • A enable/allow sb to do
  • bring sb sth
  • offer sb sth
A 成为了 …的重要问题之一
  • … has arisen as one of … (problem etc..)
    Eg: Childen’s education has recently arisen as one of the essential problem. (孩子的教育已经成为了最重要的问题之一)
  • … emerge into one’s vision (进入到…的视野中)
    Eg:The issue of environment has emerged into out vision. ( 环境问题进入到我们的视野中)
越来越 (多的人)
  • more and more 当然可以
  • People in mounting numbers (Much better)
    Eg: People in mounting numbers have pay special attention to dealing information efficiently.

额外补充

倾向,容易
  • tend to
  • be likely to
一定,势必, 导致
  • be bound to

中间段

总分结构

总起句

  1. The reasons for XXX is as follow.
  2. Many compicated factors are involved in understanding this phenomenon.
  3. As regards to its social implication, my discussion on the issue is mainly twofold.
  4. When it comes to the significance of this phenomenon, I fell it necessary to discuss the matter further.

引入背景句

  1. 拓宽视野
    expand our range of knowledge
    enreach your life
    enlarge our experience
  2. 放松心情
    relax our mind/pressure/
  3. 广交朋友
    widden our cycle of friends

万能背景句

  • 经济发展
    Owing to the steady and fastly economic development of our country, people’s living standerd is simultaneously improving at a fast rate.(1)
    随着我们国家稳定和快速的经济增长,人民的生活质量同时快速提高。
  • 社会压力
    In modern society where competition is intense, young people are under enormous pressure/strain from their work and family. (8)
    当代社会中,竞争激烈,年轻人承受着来自工作和家庭的压力。
  • 就业困难
    College graduates in China are having a hard time getting employed, more often than not, even on quite unappealing works.(15)
    中国大学毕业生面临就业难的问题,很多人甚至连待遇一般的工作也找不到。
  • 积极向上
    There is an increasing upward mobility of younger generation and dramatic changes in the traditional concept.(16)
    现在,年轻一代有不断攀升的动力,社会传统观念正在发生变化。
  • 人口膨胀
    China has a vast of population and its substantial growth rate. However, fast increasing population has potentially negative results, such as intence competition.(21)
    中国拥有庞大的人口和其显著的增长率。然而,快速增长的人口有潜在问题,比如激烈的竞争。
  • 技术普及
    Never in history was science and technology so emphasized as in modern society.(23)
    有史以来,科学技术从来没有像现在这样受到重视。
  • 技术好处
    Technology helps to enhance the effciency in peoples study and work, making our activities more economical and less time-consuming.(33)
    技术能增加人们学习和工作的效率,使得我们的工作更加经济、更加省时。
  • 技术坏处
    The youngsters are more likely to be overly dependent on technology, even getting addicted to it. (36)
    年轻人更易于过度依赖技术,沉溺于其中。
  • 教育好处
    It is common to say that higher education opens up a great number of job opportunities for people. Education is indeed a worthwhile investment.(43)
    不可否认,高等教育为人们创造了大量工作机会。教育实际是一笔值得的投资。
  • 教育坏处
    Schools nowadays pay special attention to the students’ academic scores rather than their morality.(44)
    如今,学校更重视学习成绩,而非学生的道德。
  • 活动功能
    Traveling can enlarge our experiences, relax our mind and widen our circle of friends.(47)
    旅游能增加我们的经历,放松我们的心情,以及拓展我们的朋友圈。
  • 老龄问题
    In light of the growing number of senior citizens in many countries, the caring for elderly people is becoming harder to tackle.(49)
    在许多国家,老年人的数目在不断增加,老年人的护理问题变得越来越棘手。
  • 环境保护
    Environmental protection is a central part of our effort to keep the economic development sustainable.(54)
    环境保护是我们保持经济发展所做出努力的主要部分。
  • 精神品质
    People with the spirit of creativity can not only accumulate wealth, but also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status.(55)
    有创新精神的人不仅能聚集财富,还能建立职业、适应社会、甚至获得社会地位。
  • 人生哲理
    Happiness does not lie in the mere possession of money; it lies in the joy of achievements.(62)
    幸福并非仅仅在于拥有金钱,它也在于获得成就的喜悦。

结尾段

一些单词

  • phenomenon 现象

  • tendency / inclination / trend 趋势

  • issue/matter 议题

  • spirit / character 精神

    这些词语可以在模板的前半句中自由进行替换

三大基本句型

  1. 倒装句:Only in this way can we ______.
  2. 强调句:Obviously, it is ____ that _____.
  3. 虚拟语气:It is high time that we should take concerted steps to ___.

结构 —-三句

  • 句一:总结,这件事情需要多方面的努力